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From the Student
I was there at the start.
I watched you go through the classes,
-----helped with the reports,
----------collected supplies,
---------------and dressed as a “special guest” occasionally.
I was ecstatic when you got the degree.
I helped prepare the resumes,
-----heard the reports on the interviews,
----------waited for phone calls,
---------------and celebrated when the job came
We joyfully set up the classroom.
I volunteered for the classroom,
-----sorted and graded papers,
----------helped calculate grades,
---------------and cleaned up at the end of the day.
I always said I would be okay as long as you didn’t treat me like one of your students.
Well,
I’m not okay.
Your teaching was not in vain.
I did learn quite a bit from you.
I learned patience,
-----I had to endure long talks with you so my behavior could be corrected.
I learned cleanliness,
-----the house was never clean enough for you.
I learned longsuffering,
-----no matter how much pain I was in, you were in more.
I learned endurance,
-----no matter how tired I was, there was always one more thing to do.
I learned the value of silence,
-----most of what I had to say was either offensive or wrong.
I learned to accept responsibility,
-----all of the problems in our relationship are my fault.
I learned to accept the consequences of my actions,
-----there are always lumps to be taken.
I learned forgiveness,
-----all slights I perceive are incorrect, so I need to just get over it.
I learned humility,
-----I am never as great as I once thought I was.
I learned the value of motivation,
-----why I did something is not as important as what I did.
I learned vocabulary,
-----my understanding of certain words seems to be different form yours.
I learned self-control,
-----even if I am unhappy, tears are not appropriate.
I was there at the start.
I watched you go through the classes,
-----helped with the reports,
----------collected supplies,
---------------and dressed as a “special guest” occasionally.
I was ecstatic when you got the degree.
I helped prepare the resumes,
-----heard the reports on the interviews,
----------waited for phone calls,
---------------and celebrated when the job came
We joyfully set up the classroom.
I volunteered for the classroom,
-----sorted and graded papers,
----------helped calculate grades,
---------------and cleaned up at the end of the day.
I always said I would be okay as long as you didn’t treat me like one of your students.
Well,
I’m not okay.
Your teaching was not in vain.
I did learn quite a bit from you.
I learned patience,
-----I had to endure long talks with you so my behavior could be corrected.
I learned cleanliness,
-----the house was never clean enough for you.
I learned longsuffering,
-----no matter how much pain I was in, you were in more.
I learned endurance,
-----no matter how tired I was, there was always one more thing to do.
I learned the value of silence,
-----most of what I had to say was either offensive or wrong.
I learned to accept responsibility,
-----all of the problems in our relationship are my fault.
I learned to accept the consequences of my actions,
-----there are always lumps to be taken.
I learned forgiveness,
-----all slights I perceive are incorrect, so I need to just get over it.
I learned humility,
-----I am never as great as I once thought I was.
I learned the value of motivation,
-----why I did something is not as important as what I did.
I learned vocabulary,
-----my understanding of certain words seems to be different form yours.
I learned self-control,
-----even if I am unhappy, tears are not appropriate.
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I was feeling "destructively creative" and wrote this in self-pity. Reading over it again, I find that it might apply to other people as well.
I'm not sure if it's finished, as the ending is rather abrupt.
I'm not sure if it's finished, as the ending is rather abrupt.
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I like this poem, even if it is "destructively creative." It's quite good, I think.